NOT WHAT IT DOES.

15th Sep 2017, 5:00 PM in Lizzie screws everything up
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NOT WHAT IT DOES.
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TheStevest 16th Sep 2017, 4:57 PM edit delete reply
TheStevest
I would say that at the end of the Aincrad part Kirito really dies and Asuna gets captured in this comic.
The character in ALO that is Kirito will be another character made by Sam, but with another name.
Kaze Koichi 16th Sep 2017, 5:12 PM edit delete reply
That's a huge jump between scenes.
Brax 17th Sep 2017, 11:04 AM edit delete reply
The thing about these two scenes is that, while I did cut off the ending of the former one, it basically just shows them falling and throws some more Kirito X Lis stuff at you, then cuts right over to here without showing the landing or anything. Since Kirito X Lis isn't really much of a thing here, I just went straight for the cut.
Kaze Koichi 17th Sep 2017, 5:25 PM edit delete reply
I understand that, but you could add some dialog smoothing the cut (f.e. about how they expected that killing a dragon in midair would be harder), while the dialog in the first 2 panels could easily fit on 2nd panel.

The problem I have with your comic is that sometimes going to the next page I think: "did I missed a page or something?"